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Don't Mind Me

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Kosetsu
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0 posted 09-11-2002 10:20 AM       View Profile for Kosetsu   Email Kosetsu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kosetsu


Don't mind me,
I'm just a fool
Trying to just
Keep my cool
And to not think
About your eyes,
Your hair, even
Your tired sighs,
And most of all
Your perfect heart
And of the ache
Each time we part
When daylight fades
To night's embrace,
Until my mind
Begins to race
With dreams of you;
A fantasy,
I'm just a fool,
So don't mind me.

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Not my typical style..but hey, it's a poem, and the first in a long time...

-Adam
© Copyright 2002 Adam Kamerer - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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since 07-09-2000
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Baltimore, MD


1 posted 09-11-2002 10:32 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn


I'm glad I check this out every once in awhile..funny stuff, kind of thinking about ya wondering what you were up to..writing I still see..and yes it might be a tad bit different from your regular poems but nonetheless you still got it

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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2 posted 09-12-2002 01:02 AM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Hmmm *thinks* I like your usual style better dude. I love the images you manage to come up with. This was well written though, and I did like the format. I just don't think it fits you, ya know?   *hugs* miss you man.
~Rhonda #1
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


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Kosetsu-
Well, I don't really know whether this 'fits you'
or not, but I DO know that I like it.
Very well written and I enjoyed the format.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Spine Grinder
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since 10-28-2000
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Standing In Silence...


4 posted 09-12-2002 08:30 AM       View Profile for Spine Grinder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spine Grinder

hey, since  i really don't know wut ur "usual" style is, i'm just gonna say, keep it up cuz i liked this alot!

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

Jenn Cirrincione
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5 posted 09-12-2002 02:22 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

I like this Adam. This is different from your other stuff as I recall...but this is really well formatted. Simplistic and just really pretty. Nice one.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

LyricFetish
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6 posted 09-12-2002 11:27 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

I love the phrasing. Dividing your thoughts into short segments really made the poem more real. Mahvelous, dahling! lol

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

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