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a sudden state (tribute to sept. 11)

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devinechild22
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a sudden state
i cry this day to mourn the heros
lost in a bitter tragic cry of hate
a quiet routine day
at the hardworking world trade
the silence suddenly broken by an ear splitting sound of metal versus meatl
a sudden state of confusion
a sudden state of panic
a sudden state of death
a huge fire burned like the one in the hearts of our patriots fighting for our homes
when the dust settled and hope arose
a sudden state of grief
a sudden state of loss
a sudden state of death
now we all cry for those who were lost
our friends
our soldiers
our heroes
© Copyright 2002 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-10-2002 11:12 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Nicely said. God bless America and everyone who died on 9-11-01.

--Beth

Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

LyricFetish
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I was in New York on that fateful day, a year ago, and I just wanted to tell you that you expressed the pain, and the tragic triumph, beautifully. Proud to be an American!

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

 
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