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unspoken love
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0 posted 09-10-2002 02:20 PM       View Profile for unspoken love   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit unspoken love's Home Page   View IP for unspoken love

Im addicted to you
That smile
that face
just wont go away
The love we shared
the laughs weve had
im addicted
the warm summer nights
the sunsets
holding eachother so tightly
im addicted
the day dreams
the sleepless nights
Im missing you now and forever
where did you go
im addicted to you
© Copyright 2002 Alyson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-12-2002 03:23 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

seems like you're in love
keep sharing, i loved the read

l o est mon amour?
donde est mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

LyricFetish
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2 posted 09-12-2002 11:18 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

I love the way you repeated the word "addicted" throughout your poem. It helped to tie all your thoughts together, and make them more meaningful. I love the phrasing, also. Very nicely written.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

 
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