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Jenn Cirrincione
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You
I know you lied.
I know you looked
me
straight in the eye-
and turned around and
smirked.
I know you did it.
Why'd you pretend..?
I hate to believe
after all this
time
you'd burn me.
You...
I know you made me
trust.
Trusting you
has led me to one
conclusion;
Don't.

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (09-10-2002 09:43 AM).]

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anya
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1 posted 09-10-2002 12:47 PM       View Profile for anya   Email anya   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anya

This is a very good write, you said alot in a few words here, I think most of us can relate to what you are saying as well,
anya
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Can I hurt him, please? You know I want to...

There is so much pain evident in this, Jenn. Whoever did this should be shot and put out to hang in public. A lot of tension as well. I recommend copious amounts of alcohol and a good bagging session.

Look after yourself, ok? Love ya, deary.

~AF~

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3 posted 10-12-2002 10:23 PM       View Profile for Chel2082   Email Chel2082   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel2082

This piece was very good, reminds me of a fight my roommate and I had.  People shouldn't lie, it hurts more than when you finally tell the truth if you ever do.  Keep up the great work.

chel

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4 posted 10-13-2002 11:02 AM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

Yeah- thanks everyone for your replies.
This was actually about a really close friend of mine..she tends to have a big mouth when she really shouldn't. *sigh*
Hard to trust anyone anymore.

Thanks again.
Jenn

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This poem was great.. It reminds me of my ex boyfriend.. he use to lie to me with such an ez.its crazy..I really like it. im sorry your friend lied to you like that.hope you learn to trust.
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