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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2002-09-10 09:41 AM

You
I know you lied.
I know you looked
me
straight in the eye-
and turned around and
smirked.
I know you did it.
Why'd you pretend..?
I hate to believe
after all this
time
you'd burn me.
You...
I know you made me
trust.
Trusting you
has led me to one
conclusion;
Don't.

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (09-10-2002 09:43 AM).]

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

1 posted 2002-09-10 12:47 PM

This is a very good write, you said alot in a few words here, I think most of us can relate to what you are saying as well,
anya

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2002-09-23 08:22 AM

Can I hurt him, please? You know I want to...

There is so much pain evident in this, Jenn. Whoever did this should be shot and put out to hang in public. A lot of tension as well. I recommend copious amounts of alcohol and a good bagging session.

Look after yourself, ok? Love ya, deary.

~AF~

"No wonder I do not make people comfortable. I am a mirror. I have far too many things to say." - Mouthing the Words

Chel2082
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 40
Baltimore, MD

3 posted 2002-10-12 10:23 PM

This piece was very good, reminds me of a fight my roommate and I had. People shouldn't lie, it hurts more than when you finally tell the truth if you ever do. Keep up the great work.

chel

With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2002-10-13 11:02 AM

Yeah- thanks everyone for your replies.

This was actually about a really close friend of mine..she tends to have a big mouth when she really shouldn't. *sigh*
Hard to trust anyone anymore.

Thanks again.
Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

lilmissbabyteddybear
Junior Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 17
Abilene, Texas

5 posted 2003-03-16 11:59 PM

This poem was great.. It reminds me of my ex boyfriend.. he use to lie to me with such an ez.its crazy..I really like it. im sorry your friend lied to you like that.hope you learn to trust.

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