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ShadyMakaveli
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0 posted 2002-09-10 02:33 AM


Today, i was writing some poems and i was thinking of ways to changing things up and be more creative, i came up with writing a poem in french, here it is for those who can understand french.

Avec des mots je me puis pas descrire
Votre beaute a l'interieur et dehors
Beni avec votre persence meme
Vous me fait l'interieur chaud
La fille de mes reves est vous
Etre avec vous, est celui dans mon destin
Je me sens ai besoin de u pour etre complet

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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
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1 posted 2002-09-10 03:19 AM


i would like to add, i am not french, i took a few classes of french when i was younger, and pieced this poem together through what i remembered and a dictionary, i hope everything sounds good.
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