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i tried chaning things up today

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0 posted 09-10-2002 02:33 AM       View Profile for ShadyMakaveli   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ShadyMakaveli

Today, i was writing some poems and i was thinking of ways to changing things up and be more creative, i came up with writing a poem in french, here it is for those who can understand french.

Avec des mots je me puis pas descrire
Votre beaute a l'interieur et dehors
Beni avec votre persence meme
Vous me fait l'interieur chaud
La fille de mes reves est vous
Etre avec vous, est celui dans mon destin
Je me sens ai besoin de u pour etre complet
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1 posted 09-10-2002 03:19 AM       View Profile for ShadyMakaveli   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShadyMakaveli

i would like to add, i am not french, i took a few classes of french when i was younger, and pieced this poem together through what i remembered and a dictionary, i hope everything sounds good.
 
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