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One Of These Days

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StellarChica
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floating down a river...


0 posted 09-09-2002 07:50 PM       View Profile for StellarChica   Email StellarChica   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for StellarChica


When they look at you,
They think,
Hey, she's got it all figured out.
You walk with your head held high,
Walking with your false security,
Just to see where it will get you,
It's gotten you this far already,
One of these days that one-trick pony's gonna throw you off,
And your Fourth of July parade will run into a rainstorm,
And the actress who plays you will be revealed,
For everyone to see,
Vulnerable and exposed with the spotlight shining bright,
And then when they look at you,
They'll think,
That's the girl who used to have it all together.
What happened to her?

"I've got nothing left to hide except for what's inside. I keep it all locked up in this prison we call love."-Sugarcult

© Copyright 2002 Erin Reynolds - All Rights Reserved
Acies
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Twilight Zone


1 posted 09-12-2002 03:24 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

very interesting, i'm curious on what inspired you to write this piece.
All in all, you have an imaginative mind
keep it up

l o est mon amour?
donde est mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

LyricFetish
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North Carolina


2 posted 09-12-2002 11:54 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Wow, I'm still trying to get back into my chair! Very, VERY good job on this one. I know exactly who you're talking about. I especially liked the line about "the actress that plays you". Genious.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

 
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