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Teen Poetry #5

One Of These Days

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-09-09 07:50 PM

When they look at you,
They think,
Hey, she's got it all figured out.
You walk with your head held high,
Walking with your false security,
Just to see where it will get you,
It's gotten you this far already,
One of these days that one-trick pony's gonna throw you off,
And your Fourth of July parade will run into a rainstorm,
And the actress who plays you will be revealed,
For everyone to see,
Vulnerable and exposed with the spotlight shining bright,
And then when they look at you,
They'll think,
That's the girl who used to have it all together.
What happened to her?

"I've got nothing left to hide except for what's inside. I keep it all locked up in this prison we call love."-Sugarcult

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2002-09-12 03:24 PM

very interesting, i'm curious on what inspired you to write this piece.
All in all, you have an imaginative mind
keep it up

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2002-09-12 11:54 PM

Wow, I'm still trying to get back into my chair! Very, VERY good job on this one. I know exactly who you're talking about. I especially liked the line about "the actress that plays you". Genious.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

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