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StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06
Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-09-07 12:47 PM




I'll be the first to say,
That I didn't want it this way.
Was it the distance?
Was it my face?
Was it the music?
Or the pretty girls in that place?
You'll be the first to go,
Without telling me what I need to know.
Was it my letter?
Did I say too much?
Was it my heartfelt confessions?
Or the lack of my touch?
I'll be the first to give in,
Let this feeling finally win.
Was it the things you said?
Was it the way you made me smile?
Was it you?
Of course but I'll cry all the while.


Thanks for reading.

*~erin~*

© Copyright 2002 Erin Reynolds - All Rights Reserved
anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK
1 posted 2002-09-07 03:34 AM


oh this is very good, flows well and the your sentiments come through strongly, well done,
anya

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