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devinechild22
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0 posted 09-06-2002 10:58 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devinechild22

                bittersweet
she walks uptsairs to her room
crying in her bittersweet gloom
only 13 but thinks she is in love
in this game of war, love, push and shove
she wants him to know
that inside her heart glows
for him
but he`ll never know
no he won`t ever know
cause she holds it inside
until she cries
but he will never know
no he`ll never know
cause in this world of bittersweet perfection
a young girl cannot suvive
without canfusion in hate and love
in this bittersweet game of war,love,push and shove


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devinechild22
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1 posted 09-06-2002 11:01 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

i hope you guys like this one. i had a hard time writin it. i don`t think i`m a very good poet but i love to write and i`m very persistant so i don`t give up easily. i guess that`s what a struggling poet needs,drive. thanks for your support on my first poem! thanks all.

       allison
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2 posted 09-06-2002 11:03 PM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

Aww.. such a sad poem, about an all to common sittuation.  We all fall in love sooner or later, love has no age limit.  Well, I liked the poem, you write well!  

                                                                                                    -Rich

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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3 posted 09-06-2002 11:04 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression

"cause in this world of bittersweet perfection
a young girl cannot suvive"

heh.. I like this.
Keep 'em comin!

~Sara

"I never thought it's ever come to
-this-
in fact was never what you wanted from me, or how you meant it to be."

Riley
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in the pouring rain


4 posted 09-07-2002 01:07 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

I am going through the same thing right now as we speak. But i get to see him today.Yippee! Loved it.


Ri

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

SunShine913
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5 posted 09-07-2002 02:19 PM       View Profile for SunShine913   Email SunShine913   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SunShine913's Home Page   View IP for SunShine913

and you say your not a poet would you like to tell me why you say that?>>>???

Well either way i really this poem .. although sad i liked it .. keepem coming i would like to read more~!

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*
             soon to be mother    

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...


6 posted 09-08-2002 10:57 AM       View Profile for Spine Grinder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spine Grinder

i liked this. keep writing.

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

Kevin
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7 posted 09-09-2002 10:30 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

Drive and confidence
lilmissbabyteddybear
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8 posted 03-17-2003 09:44 PM       View Profile for lilmissbabyteddybear   Email lilmissbabyteddybear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissbabyteddybear

IT was a very good poem. It is sad though, how he will never know.  I like it very much. Jenny

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Barbara
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9 posted 04-07-2003 12:49 PM       View Profile for Barbara   Email Barbara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Barbara

wow.... I really like this poem. I felt just like this when I was 13
 
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