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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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hot breath sweet voice dripping sweat smiling sparkle eyes ringing bells screaming hearts i love you words spoken unbelieveble lifeless now yes everytime i now see your laugh i know we are one ~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~ |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Wow! This is a wonderful poem! Simple and sweet, yet with a light tone that makes it all the better! Keep on writing! -Rich |
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lilmissbabyteddybear Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17Abilene, Texas |
Very good.short is good..though it is short it gets a point across...I got it.. lol.. It was very good.. Jenny >>*:):(~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~:(:)*<< |
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