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in the pouring rain


0 posted 09-06-2002 07:06 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley


hot breath
sweet voice
dripping sweat
smiling

sparkle eyes
ringing bells
screaming hearts
i love you

words spoken
unbelieveble
lifeless now
yes

everytime
i now see
your laugh
i know

we are one

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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LI, New York


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Wow!  This is a wonderful poem!  Simple and sweet, yet with a light tone that makes it all the better!  Keep on writing!


                                                                           -Rich
lilmissbabyteddybear
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Very good.short is good..though it is short it gets a point across...I got it.. lol.. It was very good.. Jenny

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