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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 09-06-2002 07:02 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley

Ok here is the deal. I like this guy, as you know, and a friend says I should take it to the next level and go out with him. I just don't know!


eyes meet across a crowded room
as have a thousand times before
yet i saw something never seen
an electrical spark in your eye

smiles so contagious as eyes sparkle
you smile so widely at me
i am scared to smile back
but do any other time

something is there i can tell
you smile everytime we look
i know you have something deep down
to tell me a thousand times

yet i know i shall always have
that smile buried for you
because you break the bindings
that hold my real self in

everytime i see your face
amongst a crowded sea
i can pick in out anywhere
every feature has been memorized

i want you to know that i feel the same
as the spark we find every day
but i can never tell you how i feel
so scared am i to tell you anything

in my heart i scream at you
tell me over and over
the only words that come
are simple and sweet

i love you
only a dream
but i can see
that spark in your eyes

everytime is reality

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

[This message has been edited by Riley (09-06-2002 10:30 PM).]

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1 posted 09-06-2002 10:19 PM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

If I only had a penny for each time I'd felt that way... us guys go through the same thing.  It's never easy to ask someone out, but if you like them enough,you will find the strength.  Well anyway, this is yet another great poem from you!  It's been so long since I've been on... it's nice to see new faces with such wonderful writing ability!  See ya 'round!


                                                                                                        -Rich

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

Riley
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2 posted 09-06-2002 10:29 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

Rich: I hope that is the way my guy is feeling cause man it is so easy to talk to him and he is sweet and nice and has the best smile. Gosh rattling on about my personal life. Bad Ri! Lol. Well thanx a lot. I wrote this cause a friend said he totallys likes me and he hangs around me compliments me, you get the picture. I am beginning to think she is right. And I wrote this because of him. Well thanks for reading.

Ri

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

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3 posted 03-18-2003 11:37 PM       View Profile for lilmissbabyteddybear   Email lilmissbabyteddybear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissbabyteddybear

Hello.. I have read alot of your work..it is very good..  I also really like this one.. Good Work.. Jenny

>>*:):(~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~:(:)*<<
~*~*~*~lilmissbabyteddybear~*~*~*~

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