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anya
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since 2002-07-27
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London, UK

0 posted 2002-09-05 04:51 PM


Your fragrence is still hanging in the air,
droplets of you in the atmosphere,
I breath in, a lingering breath, imagining I am breathing you in,
Your scent is still in my room,
almost tangible,
it makes it easy for me to trick my mind into believing you are here,
memories, half-truths and tricks will just have to do,
I just can't be without some form of you,

And without your presence in my days everything seems routine,
like I am now condemed to the mediocre things,
and i seem to to spending more and more time putting re-runs of us on inside my head,
and decieving myself that I am there,
as I said before memories, after-thoughts and ghosts of us will just have to do,
I just can not be without some form of you

© Copyright 2002 Anne Hegarty - All Rights Reserved
EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02
Posts 202
England, UK
1 posted 2002-09-06 09:37 AM


I liked this. Know the feeling! The idea of being able to fool yourself into believing that someone special is there just through their scent is great. Nice job!
Eleanor :-)

In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams

lilmissbabyteddybear
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since 2003-03-16
Posts 17
Abilene, Texas
2 posted 2003-03-18 11:54 PM


Hey.. This poem really got to me..Im going through something alot like that.. It is hard..I liked it ALOT.. THank you for the Great Read..Jenny

>>*:):(~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~:(:)*<<
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