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anya
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since 07-27-2002
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0 posted 09-05-2002 04:51 PM       View Profile for anya   Email anya   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for anya

Your fragrence is still hanging in the air,
droplets of you in the atmosphere,
I breath in, a lingering breath, imagining I am breathing you in,
Your scent is still in my room,
almost tangible,
it makes it easy for me to trick my mind into believing you are here,
memories, half-truths and tricks will just have to do,
I just can't be without some form of you,

And without your presence in my days everything seems routine,
like I am now condemed to the mediocre things,
and i seem to to spending more and more time putting re-runs of us on inside my head,
and decieving myself that I am there,
as I said before memories, after-thoughts and ghosts of us will just have to do,
I just can not be without some form of you
© Copyright 2002 Anne Hegarty - All Rights Reserved
EleanorMoonbaby
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since 09-02-2002
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1 posted 09-06-2002 09:37 AM       View Profile for EleanorMoonbaby   Email EleanorMoonbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit EleanorMoonbaby's Home Page   View IP for EleanorMoonbaby

I liked this. Know the feeling! The idea of being able to fool yourself into believing that someone special is there just through their scent is great. Nice job!
Eleanor :-)

In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams

lilmissbabyteddybear
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2 posted 03-18-2003 11:54 PM       View Profile for lilmissbabyteddybear   Email lilmissbabyteddybear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissbabyteddybear

Hey.. This poem really got to me..Im going through something alot like that.. It is hard..I liked it ALOT.. THank you for the Great Read..Jenny

>>*:):(~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~:(:)*<<
~*~*~*~lilmissbabyteddybear~*~*~*~

 
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