Expression tell me what you think its an interesting poem

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Expression tell me what you think its an interesting poem

Guardurthoughts
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since 2001-10-16

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0 posted 2002-09-04 10:01 PM

Confusion from exclusion
Depression from confession

Agony to Mutiny
A kinship faced to hardship

A Complication that can not be pardoned
The echo’s of sorrow drift in the mind of a soul confined

Let the sound of a hate crashing to the ground…
Ring, in all ears with a drastic warning.

Confusion to exclusion
Depression to confession
Aggression left an impression,
On all who tried to question her expression.

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~

"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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1 posted 2002-09-05 05:16 AM

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, the langauge is just amazing and I really enjoyed the read

Andrew

"I still feel the pain in my heart, what once was pure is now diluted" - Biffy Cylro

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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2 posted 2002-09-05 07:56 AM

Yes, interesting might be the appropriate word. I liked the way you worded this.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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