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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 128


0 posted 2002-09-03 07:03 PM


My lifestyle I'm trying to adjust
It's hard for me to open up and trust
I'm plagued with my own insecurities
To overcome them is a challenge for me
I'm starting to realize, there are ones who care
Through thick and thin, i know you'll be there
For that i am eternally in your debt
You are the friends i will never forget
Your alternate views, make me versitile
The very thought of u makes me smile
Give me some time, I promise a change
It's for me, i can't stay the same
I've got voids that need to be filled
My negative thoughts must be killed
To become a better person is my mission
What i've been through made that my decision
So when I need you, and u need me
We got each others back, that's clear to me
I hope it's just as clear to you
To those who are there Thank You!



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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
1 posted 2002-09-03 08:27 PM


This is a really good poem. Your writing shows much talent. I enjoyed this poem a lot.
Your Friend
Kellie

anya
Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK
2 posted 2002-09-04 04:26 AM


this was a really sweet poem, enjoyed it very much, hope you show this to those great friends of yours!
anya

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