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D edgar Grey
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0 posted 2002-09-02 09:31 PM


Memories flitter through my mind
An age of joy now past
Once so lively, so content
I crave those days again

Being able to think without reason
Cry and be held sincerely
My life while innocent was wonderful
But the day-to-day life has set in

Simplicity was everything
Tears fell quickly and rarely
My imagination was always afloat
Laughter was a true fulfilment

Board games, television, jokes, and more
Filled those once glorious days
Friendship was always true at the time
Back then smiles didn¡¦t dim

Stark reality faces me now
Days are long and slow, sadly
My purity has faded, like those days
The days that I crave again

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Really don't like this one, but I'm hoping that some of you geniuses will give me some great suggestions!! Ja.

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1 posted 2002-09-05 05:27 AM


This is a very good poem and I really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing it with us and keep on posting them

Andrew

"I still feel the pain in my heart, what once was pure is now diluted" - Biffy Cylro

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