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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-09-01 02:34 PM



written by ink,sealed with friendship
was something closed and certain
that we would always be there for each other
through everything life threw at us

when you were sick i was there
spiratually by your side
and vise versa you were too
everything was balanced out

my one and only true friend
that understood everything i went through
positive we will always be there
cause she went through everything i did

maybe we could get mad at each other
but in the end everything worked out
you were my only real bestfriend
and i know you always will be


* to my best friend *

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

© Copyright 2002 Riley Grant - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-01 05:41 PM


This is such a wonderful poem, thank you for sharing it with us, I really enjoyed the read and hope to read more of your work soon

Andrew

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katherine
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2 posted 2002-09-02 03:09 AM


this is really sweet you're lucky to have a friend like that.
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3 posted 2002-09-02 11:40 PM


Hey.  I really liked this one.  I have a friend like that, and it's a great thing to have.  I enjoyed the write, it was well written, and I totally know what you mean.  

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4 posted 2002-09-03 08:48 PM


I really hope you give this to your best friend...im sure they'd love to read it. This reminds me so much of me and my best friend..we went through the same exact sickness together and still are...Your very lucky to have them and they're lucky to have you

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

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