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Your Touch
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Your Touch |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC 
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Your Touch Your touch... I love when you touch me The excitement runs through me The warmth of your skin Brings chills from within The feel of you so close The look in your eyes As you hold me in your arms I feel the beat of your heart That special feeling of closeness We become as one... Tells me we will never part Your touch, takes me to another world Somewhere, I never realized But only fantasized *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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Kunoichi Junior Member
since 2002-08-17
Posts 10US of A |
I liked the topic, but I think some of the rhyming is a bit forced and takes away from the real emotion of the poem. Still, it's a good feeling to write about. |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
Hey Andrea, This is a great poem, good job. I like the way you rhyme the words it is great. Andrea (TradingSpaces19) "Whether you think you can or you think you can't, you're right." -Bach |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very nice. It must be a great feeling to have that with someone!  --Beth Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
i liked this alot. a feeling like that is one i'd never want to give up. |
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