Show Me the Money
Well, that's odd. Bennerz, posting? :P I liiike it. It's short, but to the point. Although, it's very illusioned in that I could say I feel the same way sometimes, but I don't necessarily understand all the different paths you want this poem to take. It's really well written, buddy. I especially liked:
"though i have no recognition
of this pain i have always never felt before"
(mostly because of the way you used "always never," and I quite enjoyed that)
-as well as-
"and this is what
i am reduced to"
(very lovely ending, nice way to draw it all together and bring your mind to a close, halting thoughts)
Luv ya *hugz*
Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly.
Stumbling blox can b stepping stones if u allow them 2 b.