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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2002-08-30 02:42 AM



Swirl of silver moon glow
Wade through warmest stardust
Enhale the night sweetness
Seep through shadow's pore

Light dusk beam from own eyes
Moist air finger through hair
Gentle touch of ivory shine
Sink in as night creeps forth

Twinkle stars as world spins round
Chime of harp sing soft through wisp
Rushing wind tease misty sky
Full moon shines once again

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"Words are windows to the heart."

© Copyright 2002 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2002-08-30 02:29 PM


Very pretty phrases in this. Well done Tiffany!

--Beth

Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

[This message has been edited by skyshine (08-30-2002 02:30 PM).]

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-08-30 03:48 PM


Tiffany~
This is just beautiful !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Wandering
3 posted 2002-08-30 09:07 PM


Yayness! *jumpies* goodie imagery

~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

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