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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2002-08-29 03:22 PM

I HATE YOU!

I hate the way you smile at me,
As we are looked upon by stars,
I hate the way you laugh with me,
When you feel so damn afar

I hate the way you roll your eyes,
When you hear something so wrong,
I hate the way you touch me softly,
When everything i loved, was gone

I hate the way you kiss me,
So gently on my lips,
I hate the way you always thought,
and what you would reminisce,

I hate the way your eyes would shine,
Watching me as i sleep,
I hate the way you wipe the tears,
Descending from my cheeks,

I hate the way your always right,
In everything you do,
I hate the way you get me hooked,
with three words, "I love you"

I hate the way you whisper softly,
words i can't convey,
I hate the way you read my thoughts,
When i never even say

I hate the way you're always thier,
By day and by night,
I hate the way you always apologize,
when we have a fight,

I hate the way you always smile,
And think everything will be all right,
I hate the way you guide me through,
and turn dark into a bright light,

I hate the way you always stand,
So proud to have me there,
I hate the way you always say,
that you will always care,

I hate the way you love me so much,
and say, "things aren't as they seem"
but most of all I hate all this,
Is because it's just a dream~!

___________________________________________

well i can honestly say it is no longer a dream i have found the man of my dreams he will love me forever.. i wrote this a long time ago on my other name i had to dig it up so i could let you guys know..

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*
soon to be mother

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-08-30 02:36 PM

Aww aren't you lucky....is your man like the imaginary one in this poem? If so that is really nice! Good write and good luck with everything!

--Beth

Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

2 posted 2002-08-30 02:38 PM

yep he sure is .. and thank you soooo omuch

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*
soon to be mother

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2002-08-31 03:01 AM

Andrea! I haven't talked to you in forever... lol I liked this, it was VERY well written, with an awesome message. Glad to see that everything is going well with you

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2002-08-31 02:53 PM

I remember this one.

So cute...
Hey Andrea..

So things are going well now? Wooohooooo!!
YAY for you

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Tiger
Junior Member

since 2002-08-18

Posts 24
Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2002-09-01 06:57 AM

Good poem, but i drifted off towards the middle because it got a bit boring and similar through-out. Maybe you could shorten it?

-tiger

~*I'm not deaf, I'm just ignoring you*~

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