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SunShine913
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Walking
quiet tree lined trails
shodowed in your memory,
I feel you here
reaching for me
just beyond the trees
wanting.

My name
whispers from your lips
as the wind
moves in the trees.
I turn,
shadows move,
your ghost
follows me.

My favorite place
now feels cold,
empty of the warmth
once held
vacant....
cold.

come to me...
walk again in the sun
withe me at your side,
share the shadows,
bring me peace
bring me ... you

I miss you

____________________________________________

i wrote this a long time ago .. i just never really liked it lol


*!~!* Andrea *!~!*
             soon to be mother

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devinechild22
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1 posted 08-29-2002 02:55 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

     This is a really nice poem. I really liked it.
         Allison
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2 posted 09-12-2002 03:29 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

very sweet indeed
one of my favorites of your writes
hope to see more of your work
thanks for the read

l o est mon amour?
donde est mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Muys
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3 posted 09-12-2002 08:32 PM       View Profile for Muys   Email Muys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Muys

              Com to me
        Walk again in the sun
        With  me at your side
         Share the shadows
          Bring me-----You
             I miss you
              ~~~* *~~~
        Why don't you like It?
        In that time
You where a youn girl
It is a lovely poem dear
For young and old
from a Old Lady Muys

[This message has been edited by Muys (09-12-2002 08:42 PM).]

LyricFetish
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4 posted 09-12-2002 10:57 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

I had to tell you, the imagery in your poem is beautiful. I felt it.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

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5 posted 09-14-2002 04:30 PM       View Profile for TradingSpaces19   Email TradingSpaces19   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TradingSpaces19

Andrea,

This is really good. Good Job. I felt what you meant in the poem, You're other poems are good too. Thank you for sharing it.

Andrea Kruckenberg (TradingSpaces19)
Babygirl2069
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6 posted 09-15-2002 09:53 AM       View Profile for Babygirl2069   Email Babygirl2069   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Babygirl2069

this is very nice.. my bf broke up with me last night, so this one is good to me. thanks for sharing!
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