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Teen Poetry #5

Just For You ( Please Read )

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-08-28 09:44 PM

deep down i know
true feelings surge
i now am drowning
your silent words

smelling your sweat
watching you breath
is almost more than
i can ever take

sweet surrender
smiling so bitterly
around my heart
a shiny glass plate

if you try and break
the bond of parts
then you shall find
my surpassing love

try hard to find a place
like i know you want to
seemingly mindless i find
that it is to hard for me

to grasp my love
my undying love
simple minded is it
what is within it shall be

for you

<3 No guy is worth your tears, and when you find one that is, he won't make you cry <3

[This message has been edited by Riley (08-28-2002 10:11 PM).]

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-08-29 02:39 PM

I think that this poem is really wonderful and especially the litte quote tyou had at the bottom it really touched me and i hope that you keep writing. As long as you keep writing i`ll keep reading.

Allison

Buttafly_Kiss
New Member

since 2002-09-01

Posts 3
Tx, USA

2 posted 2002-09-01 02:58 PM

Very well written poem I loved it! Thank you so much for sharing it and if you would please contact me when you write some more I would love to read them!!

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