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Luther
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since 2002-08-15
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0 posted 2002-08-28 05:11 AM


Author's Comment: This is dedicated to my girlfriend, Melanie... L'amo mi bella bambina.

A World Without “Mel”

The world would be a different place
If we didn’t have MEL
The wind would not touch my face
The flowers would not sMELl
People would slide into MELancholia
A case of MELancholy
The radios would be static
Without a MELody
And if you felt like a sweet treat
A feeling I know well
Your choices would be pretty dull
If there was no caraMEL
You couldn’t visit MELbourne
A place I often travel
And Egypt would not be the same
If It did not have a caMEL
MELenoma would no longer be
I guess that's a good thing
The Spice Girls would be without MEL C
Who couldn't really sing
The world would be a different place
If you ceased to be
The MELlow tone of your voice
Would no longer comfort me
I think of the world without you
It could be a living hell
And thats why I am thankful
To have a world with MEL

By Jordan Aarts



© Copyright 2002 Jordan Aarts - All Rights Reserved
anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK
1 posted 2002-08-28 05:50 AM


this is sweet, if not a little weird, I mean that as a compliment, anyway you should show this to the girl in question, I am certain any girl would love to have this written about them
Anya

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