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It's Too Late |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Too late realisation of a futile gesture the grasp at straws that just falls short the words that I just couldn’t say now echo empty within the night and I still feel the pain in my heart* from when you left me it’s all too little a little too late the love I found has faded away it’s all too little, a little too late a little too late for me memories of a distant past weigh so heavy upon my back a painful burden for me to bear in every thought and every dream and I still feel the pain in my heart from when you left me it’s all too little a little too late the love I found has faded away it’s all too little, a little too late a little too late for me my endless tears that fall in rain form a pool of misery not forgotten as they drain away to leave deep stains of today’s sorrow leaving deep scars upon my every face and I still feel the pain in my heart from when you left me it’s all too little a little too late the love I found has faded away it’s all too little, a little too late a little too late for me because I still feel the pain in my broken heart. * “and I still feel the pain in my heart” line taken from the band Biffy Clyro, from the song “27” off the blackened sky Album. http://www.beggars.com for more information on Biffy Clyro. Andrew Mister Zu: A self confessed cannibal |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Sometimes we have little moments of realisation in the most unfortunate of places, mine came at the beginning of what was mean't to be a break from all my troubles at the Leeds 2002 Festival. I was sitting on the ground by a warm fire when I turned to my friend and told him of someone who I had been unable to tell him off before, partly because I was embarressed because I thought that he wouldn't understand and thus he would laugh and stuff, I was also ashamed of my feelings that I fallen for someone so deeply. Anyway here I was in the middle of this field on a dark cloudy night, beside the fire telling my best friend about the girl I love but who I have lost and then I realise I can't live without her and well I can't stop thinking about her. I know this is a futile gesture "it's all too little a little too late" but I just want to tell her that I love her. Mister Zu: A self confessed cannibal |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Andrew~ this was really really sweet, i hope u show her how much u care...i luved this, good job. ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for the kind reply Spine Grinder it was much appreciated. As I've probably said above I guess it's all to little too late but I've just realised something... well not exactly but it was made a little clearer I've been sending out all sorts of confusing messages during our relationship and after it ended... just take this poem /pip/Forum49/HTML/003727.html and then read this one... confused because I know I am or that at least that I was  Mister Zu: A self confessed cannibal |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
yeah from the looks of your recent poems, it does sound like ur a bit on the confused side, but i'm in that point rite now so don't feel alone man...it sucks but theres not really a whole lot we can do about it but show that we still care...good luck  ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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Luther Junior Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 17 |
Mate, it is never too late to tell somebody "I love you" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahhh emotional piece here.  Kudos, Andrew.I'm not sure of your case exactly, but I must disagree with Luther here...sometimes it is too late to tell them you love them. Particularly when they refuse to talk to you or call you anymore...and they have a new girlfriend who hates you, and they've virtually blocked you out. I'd say then it's too late, lol sorry...I went off on a tangent. Good luck Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for you reply Jenn, and yes it is sometimes too late to say the things that we should have said, anyway hope to talk to you soon maybe we can catch up. Andrew Mister Zu: A self confessed cannibal |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Well, you may have been ashamed of your feelings because you had fallen so deeply in love, but that's okay. As long as you realise it now, it's all good, you know? Lata. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awesome Zu!!! Havent been around to see your stuff in a while but you still blow me away Amazing job as always!!Sometimes I get so weird |
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