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missing you (i dont like the name)

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SunShine913
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0 posted 08-26-2002 06:10 PM       View Profile for SunShine913   Email SunShine913   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit SunShine913's Home Page   View IP for SunShine913

I dont like the name of this poem i want to change it and you guys are right i do have alot of nicknames but this one is a keeper lol so sorry for the change .. ooo ya did i tell you im having a baby and its a lil gurl what do you think of the name Mia-Lynn???
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As I sit, engulfed in a war of emotions,
My head spinning, alive with all sorts of
notions,
Watching a cleasing light rain
Fall, and run down my window pane.
I think, hearing your voice ring in my ears,
Though only days, God, it feels like years.
From within my cloud of thought,
I wonder how you are, though, I know not.
Gently, I lay my head against my pillow,
Seeing us sitting together, beneath a
weeping willow,
Hands clasped, fingers enterlaced,
Hearts beat, flutter and race.
His arms; she feels; gently 'round her
waist.
His kiss, how sweetly it does taste.
A voice resounds within her mind,
Though, her love, no where can she find.
Her mind, weak and weary;
Her eyes, red and teary....
She drifts into her dreams,
Thoughts of her lover, in her mind, teem.
She drifts into sleep, restless,
Dreaming of a love that she does greatly
miss.

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*
             soon to be mother    

© Copyright 2002 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever


1 posted 08-26-2002 09:34 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

hmm..
im trying to think of a fitting name.

how bout,
Thunder and Rain

nah..

hmmm.. ah it doesnt really matter does it?
names mean nothing

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

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Beneath the northern stars


2 posted 08-27-2002 02:01 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

I don't know about a title, I thought of Without you, but that's almost the same as yours....But I loved the poem! I thought it was excellent. Congratulations on the baby girl! Mia-Lynn is a pretty name. When is your due date? Best of luck and God bless!

~Beth

Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

TradingSpaces19
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3 posted 09-14-2002 11:04 PM       View Profile for TradingSpaces19   Email TradingSpaces19   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TradingSpaces19

great poem nice name.

Andrea Kruckenberg
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I love it! It is a wonderful poem. You are truly a great poet, so keep writing!
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5 posted 08-13-2003 02:46 AM       View Profile for butterflykss63   Email butterflykss63   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for butterflykss63

that poem was soooo good omg it was great~!~ and the title is dumb i like it keep up the good work~!
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