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missing you (i dont like the name)

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0 posted 08-26-2002 06:10 PM       View Profile for SunShine913   Email SunShine913   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit SunShine913's Home Page   View IP for SunShine913

I dont like the name of this poem i want to change it and you guys are right i do have alot of nicknames but this one is a keeper lol so sorry for the change .. ooo ya did i tell you im having a baby and its a lil gurl what do you think of the name Mia-Lynn???
As I sit, engulfed in a war of emotions,
My head spinning, alive with all sorts of
Watching a cleasing light rain
Fall, and run down my window pane.
I think, hearing your voice ring in my ears,
Though only days, God, it feels like years.
From within my cloud of thought,
I wonder how you are, though, I know not.
Gently, I lay my head against my pillow,
Seeing us sitting together, beneath a
weeping willow,
Hands clasped, fingers enterlaced,
Hearts beat, flutter and race.
His arms; she feels; gently 'round her
His kiss, how sweetly it does taste.
A voice resounds within her mind,
Though, her love, no where can she find.
Her mind, weak and weary;
Her eyes, red and teary....
She drifts into her dreams,
Thoughts of her lover, in her mind, teem.
She drifts into sleep, restless,
Dreaming of a love that she does greatly

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*
             soon to be mother    

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Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 08-26-2002 09:34 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

im trying to think of a fitting name.

how bout,
Thunder and Rain


hmmm.. ah it doesnt really matter does it?
names mean nothing

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

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Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 08-27-2002 02:01 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

I don't know about a title, I thought of Without you, but that's almost the same as yours....But I loved the poem! I thought it was excellent. Congratulations on the baby girl! Mia-Lynn is a pretty name. When is your due date? Best of luck and God bless!


Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

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3 posted 09-14-2002 11:04 PM       View Profile for TradingSpaces19   Email TradingSpaces19   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TradingSpaces19

great poem nice name.

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4 posted 12-30-2002 03:08 PM       View Profile for AngelFacePoet   Email AngelFacePoet   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for AngelFacePoet

I love it! It is a wonderful poem. You are truly a great poet, so keep writing!
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5 posted 08-13-2003 02:46 AM       View Profile for butterflykss63   Email butterflykss63   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for butterflykss63

that poem was soooo good omg it was great~!~ and the title is dumb i like it keep up the good work~!
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