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MissunderstoodGrrl
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since 2002-08-24
Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-08-26 10:15 AM


one look at you and i fell
one look at me and i think you could tell
the way i felt was all so new
i fell in love with you
now i wish i could take it back
caring about how i feel is what you lack
i wish i could make you see
just how much you are huhrting me
loving you
is something i dont wanna do
i know you could never understand why
so please, just dont even try
you walked away and im still here
seeing you again is what i fear
for seeing you again would only bring me pain
the way you act drives me insane
why dont yoiu care
you just sit there and stare
its you who i love to death
i fear i'll love you until my dieing breath
so many days i just sit and cry
people around me watch and wonder why
i wish it wasnt you
and i know you wish that to

-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

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anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK
1 posted 2002-08-26 01:49 PM


I'm sure we all feel like this sometimes, but it really sucks when we do, hope you feel better soon, you got those feelings down well,
anya

Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2002-08-26 02:05 PM


You know, I understand this all too well.
Love is a strange emotion. Good luck and keep writing.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Chel2082
Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40
Baltimore, MD
3 posted 2002-08-27 04:17 PM


Hey girlie, you replied to one of my poems so I am returning the favor.  Love sux, it makes you have feelings towards the one person you can't have feelings for, i hate it.  I am in love with a friend, who i can tell does not feel the same way, but life goes on...or does it???  Anyway, keep up the good work.

<3 Chel

With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL

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