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peter pan
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never never land

0 posted 2002-08-24 01:44 AM


i remeber the days you use to call me
daddy's little girl
thoose days are over now
you can't get them back

no matter what i did
good or bad
i was always
daddy's little girl

i'm not little anymore
and you are not around
no longer am i
daddy's little girl

thoose days have come and gone
just like you
you came and left

no longer are we related
you said it loud and clear
that 18th year
no longer am i
daddy's little girl

I AM CANADIAN!! eh?

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paper doll
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Floating on Uncertainty
1 posted 2002-08-24 09:00 AM


I'm going through a similar experience at the moment with my father except I told him that he was the one I was no longer related to.

I'm sorry to hear your of your situation and hope that it improves for you soon. Remember that certain situations never last forever and I sincerely hope that this is one of them.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

Smiles and Cries
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2 posted 2002-08-24 11:46 PM


This really sux...i have never had a relationship with my dad so i dont know how it feels to have one then lose it but i imagine its awful. good luck with your situation...great poem

Have u ever Loved somebody so much it makes u cry? Have u ever needed something so bad u cant sleep at night? Have u ever tried to find the words but

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3 posted 2002-08-24 11:55 PM


Oh... er... Peter Pan... *hugs*
peter pan
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4 posted 2002-08-25 12:43 PM


yea well long story that doesn't need to be told he disowned me that 18th day

I AM CANADIAN!! eh?

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5 posted 2002-08-25 07:13 PM


awwwwwwwwwww girly it's ok i'm here for you!

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

TradingSpaces19
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6 posted 2002-09-02 09:34 PM


Hey I'm sorry about your situation, but that it a good poem. I have never been daddy's little girl because I have never known my father, but I have met him and he seems like he really is an asshole. Anyways keep up the good work!

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7 posted 2002-09-04 03:51 PM


This was terribly sad. : :...you wrote it well though..nicely done.

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

peter pan
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8 posted 2002-09-06 03:54 AM


thanks everyone!! hey trding you better watch out a******* ain't aloowed for future reference

I AM CANADIAN!! eh?

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