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Teen Poetry #5

I'm not so good with titles....help?

*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~*
Junior Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 38

0 posted 2002-08-23 03:04 PM

I think I always knew it
That our love would never last
I'm slowly getting over you
But I'm still dwelling in the past.

I don't miss you as much
as I miss the guyyou used to be
Of course people can change a bit
But you've changed completely.

I wish we could go back
To the way things were before
When I didn't feel so helpless
So I wouldn't need you anymore.
~*~Brittney~*~

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2002-08-23 03:54 PM

"The way you used to be"

Try using a line from your poem, i think that would sum it all up right there.

Arg... thats kinda whats going on with me but all well i hope it gets better

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2002-08-23 03:58 PM

I like Branden's title. Or maybe something like "The Past"? Anyway, good job on this one, Brittney.

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

3 posted 2002-08-25 02:13 PM

HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whats up!? well Britt I LOVED your poem!!!!!
And why don't you call it "i miss you" or
"Changed"????
Well talk to you laters!
~*~Delaney~*~

Wanting him is hard to get.Loving him is hard to regret.Losing him is hard to accept.But with all the hurt ifelt,letting go is the most painful yet

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

4 posted 2002-08-26 12:18 PM

I know a good name.

How bout "Seasons", cuz people change like the seasons

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