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Teen Poetry #5

Last Night You Told Me.

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2002-08-23 01:22 PM

Lastnight you told me you had feelings for another,
Lastnight you made my entire body shutter,
I felt as if I had lost you even though I haven't,
I dont know what to do anymore,
Open or shut the door?

If I let you in will you be kind,
Or rip out my heart and leave me behind,
Will you be there tomarrow or no,
I guess I can only hope.

You said you want to be 17,
So do I but how,
When my entire time im with you im told,
I hope were together forever,
Better the truth be untold.

You should have thought about being 17,
Before you dragged me inbetween,
Im not a selfish man,
But I really do mind when you have feelings for your only guy "friend"!

Its a beauty how this has turned out,
Me and you growing farther apart,
Today we went to the mall,
You would rather me not be there,
Moving away, leaving me sad.

I've wrote you once and I'll Write you again,
This is my one last chance to keep you for more then a "friend",
So I will back off from you now,
Let you find your life and friends.

You told me lastnight....
(to be continued)

*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~*
Junior Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 38

1 posted 2002-08-23 03:13 PM

Ooh ooh! Continue! LOL. Yeah, ouch, I can imagine how that would hurt. But like I said in my last reply, whatever happens with all this will be for the best. But in the mean time, smile!
Love:
~*~Brittney~*~

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

2 posted 2002-08-23 03:57 PM

Thank you, I hope everyone else likes this but everything will get better sympthy wont get me anywhere but is much appreciated :-p just kidding thanx now for anyone that replies ill check in one more time i just need to go lay down.

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

3 posted 2002-08-24 02:12 PM

i really liked your work.. im sorry your having a hard time tho feel free to email if you need anyone to talk too

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

4 posted 2002-08-24 09:39 PM

I really liked this, it reminded me of someone I knew......
Ri

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

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