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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision
0 posted 2002-08-23 11:43 AM


blurred orange glow flash of
caution light warning.
full moonglow beam
swim through redblood.

race over cold grey steel of
bridge of dream.
shot glass empty
never leaving bottle.

pass restless staduim of
long gone ghost.
reach break point
turn back all again.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

"Words are windows to the heart."
© Copyright 2002 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
branden726
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1 posted 2002-08-23 01:33 PM

All i want to say is Good poem i cant really give u the full critism because you write different then I and I dont know that style but nice poem.
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2 posted 2002-08-26 05:12 PM

What a wonderful poem, I really enjoyed the read thank you for sharing such a brilliant peice with us, this is one for my library definitely

Andrew

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LCBS
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3 posted 2002-08-26 10:01 PM

It reminds me of magnetic poetry


great write


~Lisa
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