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anawnda
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0 posted 2002-08-21 11:40 PM



The groggy opening of eyes,
and the sudden realization
of a big mistake,
stark-naked with a pain in
the head

you reach for the clothes
you wore
only to find that they're not
there anymore.

and you try to remember
lastnight,
only to come up with a
single wish...

that you should've stayed
in bed.

******************


* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me with the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

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Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2002-08-21 11:42 PM


LMAO
Too true.
So many I wish I never's....lol

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

anya
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since 2002-07-27
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2 posted 2002-08-22 12:15 PM


oh you really captured that morning after feeling here, jeez I hate that feeling, anyway I liked this
anya

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
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3 posted 2002-08-22 01:43 PM


Lol, haha I liked this! Very cute!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Tiger
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4 posted 2002-08-23 03:16 AM


Very cute... nice capture. Keep up the brilliant work
-tiger

paper doll
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Floating on Uncertainty
5 posted 2002-08-24 02:01 AM


Those infernal morning after scenarios. *shudders* pure evil.

You've captured the scene well. Thanks for posting.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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6 posted 2002-08-24 04:27 AM


hey great write i loved it!! hope to see more from you!

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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