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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 08-20-2002 07:48 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley

This one might be a little confusing because I am so confused and frustrated right now.

panting
shorten my steps
don't stop
go

you are
standing there
waiting
cheer me forth

finish
done for now
you smile at me
for another moment

you pull
me close to you
our bodies touch
combined as one

our lips burn
as the flesh connects
you pull back
holding me close

you smile at me
whisper sweet
into my ear
you are beautiful

i love you
loving me more
for each day i smile
your lips come again

upon their touch
my body takes over
such to much
loving you this day

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

© Copyright 2002 Riley Grant - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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obscured vision


1 posted 11-28-2002 05:27 AM       View Profile for knightlyshadows   Email knightlyshadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for knightlyshadows

quote:
you are
standing there
waiting
cheer me forth

Sounds like you had/have something special in your life. Wish we all had someone to cheer us forth. Good write dear.

A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

Barbara
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2 posted 03-14-2003 12:36 PM       View Profile for Barbara   Email Barbara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Barbara

WOW!!!!!!!!!!
I can really relate to this poem, because I one was that girl to someone... =)))) :*
Its A Great Poem!
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