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LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2002-08-20 06:03 PM

I know its hard
i feel it to
missing you so much
yet beng so far apart

every night
i pray to god
that you come
back to me

Im just so afraid
that you'll go to another
instead of me
just because he's closer

i just want you
to be happy
but this is tearing
me up inside

and im so afraid
my prayers
arn't enough

I'm so afraid
to lose you
my love

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Nazera29
Junior Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 34
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-08-21 12:55 PM

wow this is the right poem for the exact thing that im dealing with right now... i dont know how to deal either... but i like this poem alot, it really sums up the feelings in few words, which is something i really admire in a poem. good job, and good luck, and thanks alot for the read

*We are the hero in our own story*

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

2 posted 2002-08-21 12:03 PM

I liked the simplicity of this poem, your emotions came through well
anya

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

3 posted 2002-08-21 04:25 PM

thank you both for your replies

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2002-08-22 02:33 PM

I liked this poem alot. I've never been in a long distance relationship, but I'm sure it's very difficult, as you portrayed well in your poem. Good luck to you!!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

5 posted 2002-08-22 08:06 PM

I really liked this, and I really wish I could let this guy read some of these because that is exactly what I feel.

Ri

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

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