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anawnda
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0 posted 2002-08-16 03:06 AM


thursday8/15/02


the unhurried motions of feet,
on a cold-damp pavement,
the pitter patter of rain,
and me w/this oversized black bag.
furiously organizing my thoughts.

you never answer anymore,
everytime i call.

you jerk!
its your loss
but the pain is mine to keep.

I wish it was a friday......


***
* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me with the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher



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1 posted 2002-08-16 03:58 AM


wow very good stuff!! sounds like something i jsut went through

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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