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knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2002-08-15 11:55 PM



Halo of Lights
Spectrum of life
shows of Honoured might

Existence of strive
soul lost in pain
Cinders of Ashed hope

a Hero is Slain
no longer can Cope
the Fae begin to Dim

as one once Believed
Now, only in Hymn
the World began to Grieve

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

"Words are windows to the heart."

© Copyright 2002 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
paper doll
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since 2002-08-04
Posts 133
Floating on Uncertainty
1 posted 2002-08-16 10:25 PM


Fabulous rhyme scheme you've got running through this. It seems unique but has got a touch of pure talent to it. I'm still waking up so the actual message is a little blurred in my head but rest assured I'll get it and be back to comment.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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