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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
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Once In a Blue Moon. Once In a blue moon You meet a girl Who captures your heart and steals it Takes your breath and leaves you speechless Left star struck and dumbfounded Lying awake in your own dream You are immortal Unaware of your fragile existence Not prone to fear or terror Happiness is existing and your existence is purposeful. Well this is a repost (at least I think it is, of my very first poem, I've made a few changes but not too many. Now the reason for this repost is to celebrate writing my 275th Poem and to announce my new forums at http://chronicles.proboards4.com/index.cgi feel free to post your poetry, spam to your hearts content or just chat. Soon I will be adding a link from my new website "Chronicles of Delusion" to the forum but until now that link is all I have.  Andrew Visit my forums @ http://chronicles.proboards4.com/index.cgi |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nicely done, Andrew. You will see me around there. By the way, pukka piece of writing. Enjoyed. Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked that andrew but instead of girl i put in guy just cus lol good write!! robin you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, this is a pretty little piece, i especially liked the line of: "Lying awake in your own dream" -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113 |
i wish there was a guy who can write me a love poem, unfortunately, most jocks are not equipped w/a poetic soul...sigh, oh well i can always try the geeks. but seriously though, i really really love this. short and sweet. thanks by the way for posting something to my defense on my very first post. now im enjoying my stay here. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Too true; I wish you the best. |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Ah yes, the girls that do that to you mean the world and more.  Thanks for sharing this Andrew. You've completely reminded me of someone. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
You've painted a wonderful picture of whatever that stuff is...and what's really cool about this piece is how that feeling's been set up for failure...or maybe i'm just a pessimist.  In any case, I loved this.~Carly "Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrew~ The title definitely caught my attention~  Love the heartfelt stir of emotion in this~ I did one along the same lines ... isn't it wonderful how someone inspires our hearts~  /pip/Forum70/HTML/003482.html *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you to everyone who replied, I have really enjoyed reading your wonderful comments, sorry I can't write individual replies at the moment but I am a little rushed off my feet, but hopefully I will get round to it. Once again thanks for the comments Andrew Visit my forums @ http://chronicles.proboards4.com/index.cgi |
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