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Hallucination
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0 posted 2002-08-12 08:58 AM


I never knew
That she was feeling so sad,
I had no clue
That I was holding her back.
'Cause she always smiled,
Her eyes were so kind.
I never knew...

I never knew
She felt alone in my arms.
But this is true
I never meant her no harm.
Wanted her to breathe,
To see her succeed.
I never knew...

I let her go...finally,
She whispered in my ear: "Thank you so much".
As she slipped outta my hand,
I said: "You are welcome...Goodbye, good luck".
Untill then I never knew
Her uncolored rainbow was cause of me,
As the moon climbs the starlight
My pockets are filled with boxed memories.

And now I know
There was one happy ending,
To this bold show
There's also one heart mending.
She's glad cause she's free,
I'm the same old me.
But know I know...

Untill then I never knew...

[This message has been edited by Hallucination (08-12-2002 09:00 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-12 10:15 AM


This was so sad! I always love all your work, no matter what style you write in.... Good job on this.
Luv Alwayz:
~*~Brittney~*~

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2 posted 2002-08-13 06:42 PM


This one had me sighing. Unique kinds of losses make good poems...

  ~Carly

"Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions."
  ~David Borenstein

Jester
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3 posted 2002-08-14 12:32 PM


A chill of understanding up my spine as i finished this... incredible understading.
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4 posted 2002-08-14 04:05 AM


i loved this one very well written.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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