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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-08-08 01:45 PM

Hey! I haven't written anything lately, but I was just at the beach where I finally was able to get some inspiration. I really dont know where this one came from, I was just walking along the beach looking at the stars and started writing it... Let me know what you think about it.

SATISFIED

I try to be a child of yours
In which you can rely
Sometimes I will fall short
But I get up again and try
I hold you close in heart and soul
You will never be denied

Chorus:
I often come to you
With questions asking "why?"
But that's not the reason
That I came tonight
You are the only one
In which I can confide
And I'm not leaving here
Until my soul's been satisfied

I was not there
When you were crucified
I could not see
Those tears that you cried
But I know that my sins and shame
Where the reason that you died

I come here hungry for you
Here I am with my arms open wide
I lay down my life for you
To your call I’m ready to reply
Love, compassion, all that is good
Is what I see in your eyes

Chorus

You are the only one
In which I can confide
And I'm not leaving here
Until my soul's been satisfied

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (08-09-2002 12:41 AM).]

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-08-08 01:56 PM

Great Poem Cody...Maybe I should try the beach for some inspiration. I really liked it!!!

I loved this verse:

I was not there
When you were crucified
I could not see
Those tears that you cried
But I know that my sins and shame
Where the reason that you died

~Lisa

Did you get a new picture?

[This message has been edited by LCBS (08-08-2002 01:58 PM).]

Nicholas
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

2 posted 2002-08-08 02:26 PM

I loved it Cody Great job

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2002-08-09 12:49 PM

great poem loved it hun keep it up cody!

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

4 posted 2002-08-09 06:21 AM

hey, theres nothing like the beach to give you inspiration is there, and i liked this alot, thankyou
anya

Dustin462
Junior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 23
Selah, WA

5 posted 2002-08-09 08:14 PM

hey cody i thnk tis is a good poem, i ont really know much abot the faults on petry but otherwise its good

Dustin

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