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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
Even after all these years you still seine to amaze me. You still manage to leave me in awe. Lately it seems my jaw is glued to the floor. You do thing you never would have done before. My heart goes out to you but my hand will not. I will not try to run your life. The choices you make are not thought through. I am loosing all respect for you. You are turning into everything you hate. Breaking promises you made to me. I fear we will grow farther and farther apart. And I will be forever be missing a piece of my hart. I hope you can see what you have done. And turn around back around before it’s gone too far. "The Fat Man Walks Alone" |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Oh I know the feeling of this....people screw their lives up so badly and don't realize it until it's much too late. It's incredibly painful to see. I didn't understand the format of this. Some lines rhymed while others did not. It was powerfully written though and had a strong message to it. Either way I like it. Good job, Betsy! Keep it up.  ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Betsy... Is this about KTP again? Why don't you try and talk to her, maybe give her this. At the very least, talk to me about it hun. Good job- ~Lisa p.s. you know my plan.... |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
nana LCBC not about KPB this time, dont worry i love ya ill tell you about her next time we talk loveya "The Fat Man Walks Alone" |
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