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Teen Poetry #5

Waiting for Cruelty!

ScrpyCJ
New Member

since 2002-06-24

Posts 9

0 posted 2002-08-06 09:07 PM

I tried my best,
Emotions were running wild,
You made me believe I was the one for you,
You told me that you loved me,
You said that we were something special,
It was all a lie,
You used me more than you can image,
Apologies running scarce but were being said,
What if I turned my back on you,
Ruined your heart,
Lies and more lies were just consuming my memory,
Your cold heart,
Your cold lies,
Far from forgiving,
Im so disappointed,
Will I wait for you?
No I wouldn’t wait for you,
Just look at yourself,
Ask yourself,
Would you have waited for me?

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2002-08-06 10:08 PM

i liked this and can really relate 2 it.good job.

~Ultimately, we are all dead~Proximo

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-08-06 10:32 PM

Is this a repost? It has a familiar ring to it....or maybe I'm just going crazy! I liked it, it had a lot of emotion behind it. Great Job

~Lisa

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