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StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-08-06 07:53 PM

Another one I wrote awhile ago when I was mad at a friend of mine.

Wasn't it obvious enough for you?
Wasn't I desperate enough for you?
I guess even my style of depression isn't up to your standards.
Didn't I cry enough for you?
I think I'll cry some more and drown you in my tears.
Weren't all of my sad 'I miss you' letters enough for you?
Well, you can have them all shoved down your throat.
Didn't I wish on enough stars for you?
Ok, next time I'll just wish you were dead.

Thanks for reading.

*~erin~*

"Temporaryism has been the Black Plague and the Jesus of our age."-incubus

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-08-08 12:54 PM

Well, I personally wouldn't wish for anyone to be dead. But I do understand your frustration, Erin. Sometimes people just seem too demanding. And it always feels so good to vent!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~*
Junior Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 38

2 posted 2002-08-11 04:43 PM

**Erin**
I was reading this and when I got to the part where you said "Next time I'll just wish you were dead" (something to that affect) my eyes just totally popped out of my head. LOL, I can definetly understand where you're coming from and I hate that to some people, nothing is ever enough. You know? Well, great post. I like your work....

Love:
~*~Brittney~*~

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2002-08-12 03:40 PM

Oh I definately have a list of people I could take out. I try not to hold grudges though. That stuff'll eat away at you.. trust me.

Anywho... I think this line was striking:

"I guess even my style of depression isn't up to your standards"

.. just because it is so incredibly true about some people.

I hope all is well.

Peace.

I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday.

paper doll
Member

since 2002-08-04

Posts 133
Floating on Uncertainty

4 posted 2002-08-13 04:39 AM

Oh boy could I relate to this. It's full of raw hatred that can't help but jump off the screen at you. Wow...I'm impressed. Hitlists are fun....really they are. Make one up and you'll see how much better you feel.

The piece was fantastic. Be proud.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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