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0 posted 2002-08-06 05:12 PM


In despair and incoherent
  
Bitter words strike
heavily upon a gentle heart
violently stabbing at all that’s left
of happiness
bleeding slightly he clutches his chest
and screaming defiantly
lifts, himself of the floor
searing pain rips through his veins
and burning tears in his eyes,
leave him blind
little white lies echo in the air
and drown out the beauty
no bird song is heard
in silence he weeps
no words on his tongue.

Andrew

"If you are afraid of wolves, stay out of the woods"

J.V. Stalin

© Copyright 2002 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-06 05:28 PM


Wombles? We have a sub. teacher at school named Mr.Wombles. That's all I know about that. I missed something, eh?

Anywho, it was very mellow, visually striking, desparate, and true. Sometimes.. there is plenty to be said, but no way in which to say it.

I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday.

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2 posted 2002-08-06 05:34 PM


All I can say is wow. This is one of the most poweful pieces I've read from you. Good job
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Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2002-08-07 12:43 PM


i've always liked ur poetry, but this, i luved this. awesum job.

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

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