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Be careful |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Be careful don’t hurt yourself- As you jump to those conclusions… It hard for doctors to repair Your assumption made contusions… Be careful running with that knife You could trip and fall…. You’d be impaled on your jealousy My back not stabbed at all Be careful with the web you weave You could trap yourself within suffocate in your selfishness Vanish in your chagrin |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I agree......good advice....some people have no idea what they are getting themselves into and they have to find out for themselves the hard way. Good work Lisa.  ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i liked this, good job  ~Ultimately, we are all dead~Proximo |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
liked this alot but then again everything of yours that I have read of yours I have really enjoyed reading, thankyou anya |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Great flow of words, everything seemed to fit perfectly. ~Sky |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Lisa, Lisa, Lisa! You're getting even better at this than you were before! Love it! |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
hun what happned? "The Fat Man Walks Alone" |
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