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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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I don't know why im posting again. i want to close a part of my life and this is a place that i wrote it seems some pretty naive and foolish girl poetry. You see someone who i've loved for almost 4 yrs i think is gone from me...not dead i dont think...but he abandoned me....or so it seems people tell me. So i guess this is some sort of closure...a place where i used to where my heart on my sleeve. but...since no one has seemed to care in my life...i guess this was the only place i could vent...not even a love i thought was strong could give me that GOOD BYE there's not a lot left here for me i'm dead can't you see these tears are worthless after years of foolishness when our love seemed to die what was left of me? of ? this codependency is killing but so are the drugs i was independent... know im addicted our love seemed to drag us both down I wish we could have loved forever and had children together but i was wrong i think you lied i think we lied to our minds im dead dont you see i don't think im naive or foolish now i think you killed me while i held the weapon i hate these tears almost as much as i hate your love i think you killed her and left a shell i thought we would love forever why did it die? i guess im stupid to have loved i hate your memories that you planted in me i hate the picture of us married with kids but most of all i loved our joy so when you decide that you've never stoped loving please let me know so i can smile again so we can start brand new I love you Brad..... Regina |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Hey there, this was an excellent piece for closing the door on the pain you still had. I liked the style of it, well done. Ps..keep your head up, someone else will catch your eye one day. Tomer |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
You have so much talent...even if you stop posting here, don't stop writing!! I'm truly sorry to hear about what happened between you and your love..but don't ever give up. True love will find you no matter what. Keep yr head up, things will always get better. Tai |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, sorry to hear about your situation, just keep being a strong person. i liked this poem, and i hope you don't leave pip cuz you are one of my favorite poets here. be happy. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Ina... I'm sorry that we never got to be friends. I guess I always kept myself at an arm's length from you. I treated you unfairly, and I apologize. I hope that you have a full and rich life. Don't ever define yourself by anyone other than yourself. Remember that, okay? |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
This is a most heartfelt piece and I am extremely sorry to hear about your situation at the moment. Love doesn't just go away so hopefully this Brad will see the light and you two will be together again. As for the piece, nicely put together. You've shown a very good display of your pain with a meaningful undercurrent. Thank you for sharing this. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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