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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-08-03 03:33 PM



This is for a guy I met on the internet and he hasn't replyed to any of my e-mails lately and well here it is....

you tell me
i love you
over an e-mail
or two

but not seeing
your smiling face
not knowing that
your really smiling

it hurts me to much
i don't know you
mean what you say
so i ignore it

scared that you
do really love me
but even more scared
that you won't

but as i go to sleep
i picture what
you really look like
and fall into a

deep slumber

Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine

© Copyright 2002 Riley Grant - All Rights Reserved
StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06
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floating down a river...
1 posted 2002-08-03 04:17 PM


Wow, this poem really hit home for me. And I can relate all too well to this. It's frustrating, isn't it? *sigh* Well, this was a really great poem. Good luck with this guy. Thanks for sharing!

"I like Erins...especially the you kind."-Ryan :D

Riley
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in the pouring rain
2 posted 2002-08-03 04:24 PM


ahhh, how frustrating it is, no. well he hasn't replyed in like a month and I am really kinda like, where are they! yea, well good luck to you to.


~*Riley*~

Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine

paper doll
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Floating on Uncertainty
3 posted 2002-08-04 08:13 AM


Ah internet relationships...they're interesting. I didn't really enjoy this piece because it lacked sustinence but I'm sure with a bit of work it could bloom into something fantastic. Just watch your spelling and grammar.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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