you're -published- ???!!! le~ah!!! thats great.... give me /more/ info chica. (msn or email or somthing dangit!) :p and hey dorkO, you've never sucked in your life *poke* so dont go sayin you do, or ill have to beatcha up ya hear?
oO never noticed your critique message before.. *likes it*   anyway, the poem itself flowed -very- nicely. and yes yes rhymin was good, you never seem to have trouble with that unlike us sucky ppl where it always seems as if we -force- it. which is Not a good thing, yesh. so, all in all you did a good job on this lil lesson on rhymin and wordin. :p wub ya leah dear *peck*

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Falling, Stars of Dreams.

I can't help but laugh at that last line, it was a bit of a suprise, the rest of the poem was wonderfully executed though, a great read at the end of a long day

oh and congratulations on getting published

Andrew

"If you are afraid of wolves, stay out of the woods"

J.V. Stalin