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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-08-02 11:45 AM



trust
defined in your manner
was denial
betrayal

love
trusted by you
ment nothing
but torment

me
loved by you
was nothing more
than broken souls

you
broken down by me
is nothing more
than a person

not a friend
never more than
wanted you to love
you caress me with hate

silent
torture wracked
heart left me
you will never be here

lonly
night upon
my broken window
laying there

twisted fate

gone

Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine

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Dark Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-08-02 09:42 PM


I loved the way you ended this.. the way the words just kind of drip off into oblivion.. purrr..

"trust
defined in your manner
was denial
betrayal"

"if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos

Riley
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2 posted 2002-08-03 12:16 PM


Thank you so much dark enchantress. Ah, how I try huh.


~*Riley*~

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