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Chel2082
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 40
Baltimore, MD

0 posted 2002-08-02 08:31 AM

You tell all your friends we're a couple
We do things together
I see you checking out the other girls
You pretend nothing happened
You think we will always be together

If I wasn't here what would you be doing?
You think we will always be together
While you are getting your mack on
How long do you think I will stay?
Should I pretend nothing happened?

We never fight
Cause we are always there for each other
How long do you think this will last?
Can we still pretend?
Will we still be together,
Through thick and thin,
Better or worse.

Where would you be if we weren't....together?

With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2002-08-03 12:15 PM

Reminds me of the Martina McBride song "Where would you be," which has the same concept. Kind of an interesting thing to think about... Anyway, I liked this, good write. Thanks for sharing.

      - Cody -

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If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-08-03 01:30 AM

Unfortunately I know this situation. This is a great expression of what your feelings are. Thanks for the good read!

Chel2082
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 40
Baltimore, MD

3 posted 2002-08-03 10:53 AM

Thank you for the replies...I do apperciate them. Glad you liked this piece.

With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL

paper doll
Member

since 2002-08-04

Posts 133
Floating on Uncertainty

4 posted 2002-08-04 07:54 AM

Unfortunately we all go through emotions like this when we're with someone. I hope for you that these feelings pass and you two can get on with enjoying eachothers company.

As for the piece, it was nicely structured with some good points.

Thanks for posting it.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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