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Teen Poetry #5

Us Against The World

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-08-01 07:08 PM

Safe, safe is what you make me feel
Each and every night
Home, home's when I'm tucked in your arms
Cuz' then everything's right
Could spend lifetime's in your gentle embrace
Could spend hours just caressing your face
Cuz' when the shoe doesn't fit
And I just can't wear it
You tell me, yes you tell me.

Whenever the dark side starts leaning
And life suddenly lose all meaning
It's not you against the world
No, it's us against the world.

Your, your love's the reason I breathe
Think life's wonderful
Changed, changed me from awful 'to
Something beautiful
Could sit for years and smell your sweet perfume
Could make hot romance spread throughout your room
Cuz' when the shoe doesn't fit
And I just can't wear it
You tell me, yes you tell me.

When rain pound like needles 'gainst your shoulder
And it seems like the game is over
It's not you against the world
No, it's us against the world.

I can never repay you
For all that you've done for me
How would I ever repay you
For everything you've done for me
Tell me...

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

1 posted 2002-08-02 01:21 AM

Only thing that confused me was...what exactly does he tell you? (I'm probably just missing it)
But i enjoyed this immensely (<---this is me trying to use big words i'm not sure i can spell) It sounds like it would work very well as song lyrics.
Thanks for the great read
K

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

2 posted 2002-08-02 01:22 AM

ps - i honestly didnt mean to choose that big yellow head sticking its tongue out at you as an icon! lol

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

Chel2082
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 40
Baltimore, MD

3 posted 2002-08-02 08:36 AM

good work...i enjoyed this piece a lot. keep it up.

<3 Chel

With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL

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