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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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This poem was written because I feel so down right now. I know, pitiful, but if you only knew. Maybe my poem will explain it. crystal blue eyes soft blonde hair encouraging smile laughter rings watching you scared seeing you talk popular friends I am not one from afar i watch you smile and laugh so carefree and fun i wish it were that easy courageous i walk talk to you look at me like why are you talking thrown down in the dirt no reason to go on nothing to have to hold on to when scared your picture i shant have sitting on my window sill only my saddness to comfort me now Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
oh I hope writing this poem made you feel a bit better and helped you vent your feelings, but anyway I liked the poem even though it was sad, it was so full of emotion. anya |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Thank you a lot. It helped slightly but it can never mend a broken heart. Anyways. Thanks again.  . ~*Riley*~ Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine |
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