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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I hope you don't come around anymore, even though I crave for so bad that I can't sit in my own skin, cause these conversations are getting automatic, arn't they, you tell me life is what i make of it, tell me how can I make anything without you? you were always my foundations and your stare makes me ashamed of my own weakness I can't bare to cry in front of you again and you say why am I stopping us being friends you say that you need my right now, oh, but you always did know the right things to say didn't you but this time I'm not big enough to forgive, too proud to forget I hope you don't come around anymore I'm embarressed by the knowledge of what we've been through together, and the truths we've layed bare to each other and I'm tired of your need for absoluton but it is the one thing I can withhold from you Iv'e been giving you everything else for far too long |
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SavingGrace Junior Member
since 2002-05-31
Posts 26not yet found |
honestly, i didn't really like the form of this poem but i found myself ignoring that because of what i was able to get out of just reading the words. i don't usually reply to many poems unless something really gets me. and this i really felt like i related to it in many ways. i liked the way this was able to reach me and the way the words were displayed. good write. i cant wait to see more from you. ~*Grace*~ |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
thankyou, i'm glad you could relate, I know the form of the poem is not good, I find it hard to construct my poems well anya |
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